February 13th, 2011

beautiful_pants_woot

Bedtime Stories

I bounced the idea in my head for a while before I finally was able to sit down and write this due to crazy business. I like some parts and others I don't think are too strong, but overall I was aiming to make this as close to dialogue-apt between a fourth grade older sister and a somewhere between first and second grade younger sister; I tried to keep the details sparse and focus instead on how it'd sound between the two of them more than anything else, but I'm not sure if that works for the story overall. At the very least, it's fun :)

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